StoryBoard

So, what I'm planning on doing here, where my friend is going to be in a dark room where he is creating some magical. His brother is going to walk in, and check up on him, and promptly leave as he is working like a mad man, then he finished his creation, to find out he was making a sandwich.

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  1. Taylor SeidNovember 4, 2018 at 6:03 PM

    I really enjoy the plot twist at the end, that's very creative! Because the text is small, it's kind of hard to read your shot angles, but I can see you have them. Great job!

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  2. Kyle KoptaNovember 4, 2018 at 7:47 PM

    I like the narrative going on here! I think you have some good opportunities to play with lighting in this project to make it moody and really push that tonal shift near the end. Cool stuff!

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  3. UnknownNovember 5, 2018 at 10:38 AM

    This is going to be an interesting story. I really love your imagination with this, especially the plot twist. Like Kyle said you can totally play with the lightning and with the dark room maybe a lamp in the far end would be a good prop to use. Good job!

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